Talk:Purple Spawn

Various issues that should be addressed
I fixed up this article so that it complies with the minimum requirements to conform to the MoS, though to be honest, this article needs a lot more work, most of which would involve content. Of course, I can't change content (other than switching out the Crucible for a different star), so I can only provide guidelines. Here goes: Since this article is not at immediate risk of deletion, I would suggest that you think about these questions and try to address them as you continue to edit the article. -- Gnostic 03:57, February 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * Turian names are usually inspired by names from Ancient Rome ("Garrus", "Sidonis", "Arterius", etc.), and the only turian name that I know of that includes an apostrophe is "Lorik Qui'in".
 * All turians are required to perform military service from the time that they turn 15 until they're 30. I have a hard time believing that a general's son would skip out of his service at only 20 to lead a gang.
 * Drug smuggling is not really something that turian criminals get involved in. They are a dextro-protein species, whereas most of the drugs that are used by other species are based on levo-proteins. A levo-protein-based drug like red sand would kill any turian who consumed it, and any drugs that the turians are capable of ingesting would be similarly lethal to most other species. Plus, the market for red sand is extremely small, since it's only known to affect humans.
 * I'm not sure where you're coming from with this idea for a star that makes bullets "stronger". You would first have to define what "stronger" means. Does the sun increase the physical force that the bullets transfer to their targets on impact? Does it increase the bullets' acceleration or velocity?