Talk:Shadow Broker Dossiers/Maria de Wilden

RE:Audio Transcript 1
I played around a bit with Dabaleta's words in the audio transcript section, throwing in some South African slang (or at least SA slang as I predicted it might be in a post-terrestrial age) to give her a bit more character. I've included a bit of a glossary to help decode the new transcripts. If it's too much, feel free to undo it. -- Gnostic 06:06, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

I like it. I am going to assume that some are real such as bedslapper or stake. Regardless this is helpful and brings out the heritage she possess. It will also help me in future audio and correspondance, my plan for this is to use audio and letters to show her personality changing. As after her victory on Mindoir she is like your Sharon or Paragon Shepard. She cares about saving lives, protecting people, and is not a 'glory hound'. I am hoping to install further recordings and correpsondance later to show how she slips to neutral, back to soldier in Cerberus, then straight to Hell, renegade, murderer, lone wolf, and lustful reverse prostitute killer through her conversations. This will aid me in keeping her cultural element. Thumbs up to you Gnostic. Foxtrot12 21:21, January 14, 2011 (UTC)