Talk:Riley J. Diamond

Y'know, um. . . I'm pretty sure this guy didn't kill the Illusive Man. This article has numerous grammatical errors, some of which might lead to great confusion, especially those that seem to be written half as an article and half as a story. For example, the idea of recruiting Koliat is good, but to quote from the article "Koliat took out his Binochulars he sighed because he didn't see the former warlord".

This is a bit out of context. Was he standing on top of a planet looking around the universe (with binoculars)? That just ain't how it's done. Where was Kolyat, and you should take out the "he sighed" part and save it for an actual story. Not to mention spelling errors. But those can be fixed just by running a copy of the article's text through a word processor and fixing the errors. Bottom line, the article needs a great deal of work, provided the author is still active.

That Damn Sniper, sniping. 04:14, May 4, 2012 (UTC)


 * What you have to understand is that this article was written by the Davis brothers, who have been banned from this wiki because their writing skills are so terrible that their mere presence on this wiki nearly drove Hunter Zealot into a murderous rage. -- Gnostic 06:10, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Ah. I've seen that all too often on Halo Fanon. So can we delete this unsightly thing, or at least namespace it?

That Damn Sniper, sniping. 06:31, May 4, 2012 (UTC)