Talk:Mass Effect: To the Last Man

Possible Name Change for Book
This is mostly for the author's reference. Feel free to list other ideas for changing the book's name.
 * Sole Survivor
 * Last Man Standing
 * A Life For a Life

No one can escape the Hunter Killer. 19:28, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

I think the current name is better than any of those or what I can think of.Only the faithless will perish, but those without cannot be punished. 02:09, April 24, 2012 (UTC)


 * Thanks. I just thought it could be improved, but I decided to keep it as is yesterday. No one can escape the Hunter Killer. 02:22, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Hey I was reading over what you got so far, I assume that you're planning adding a bit more details? The whole basis is good but its a tad... stale, needs a bit more refining and ironing out (Though it could be you're already planning on doing this and I'm just making myself look like an absolute jackass). If you're too busy to do so, I could always add some details into the chapters, just merely describing things like the settings, what people are looking like, you know, those little bits and pieces to get readers IN the story (Without altering any of the core components of the story). If not, I can always offer some constructive criticism and focus on my writing.

Antares2 (talk) 17:18, October 5, 2012 (UTC)

Adding some details
Antares2, that would be a HUGE help. I've been very busy recently, and I still have a lot of work to do. Though because I have some extra time off this weekend, I will be able to write a little more to the story. If you believe that you can give something a better desciption than I have (or have not, for that matter), then by all means, go right ahead. I've never been the best at descibing things in my stories, and that is a major problem for me which I've been studying recently. Thanks in advance, Antares2. Show no mercy, have no fear. Just give &#39;em Hell, and we&#39;ll end it here (talk) 18:41, October 6, 2012 (UTC)